Dhamidov

Please leave me comments with your signature , Thank you Dhamidov (talk) 03:43, 20 September 2012 (UTC)Reply

Peer Review

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Hey there Dhamidov! I would like to peer review your article!

1/1 The student has improved the quality of the information available in this article 1/1 The student has improved the clarity and/or organization of the content 1/1 The student has clearly explained the method and findings of an empirical paper 1/1 The student has correctly cited the empirical paper according to Wikipedia guidelines, and the paper is appropriate (i.e., it is an empirical study on development published the results in an academic journal)

Comments and Suggestions for Improvement: It appears you have done well! You have went through and improved the article through it's grammar and spelling. The whole section you added on "Resilience in Children at High Risk for Psychological Disorder" was informative, related to child development (studied children), and it related well to the topic of psychological resilience.

Perhaps elaborating on the typed of psychological disorders that could arise would be another great step to improving this article overall!

EnlightenMe0 (talk) 04:17, 8 November 2012 (UTC)Reply

Hello, Dhamidov. I have chosen to peer review you.

0/1 The student has improved the quality of the information available in this article

0/1 The student has improved the clarity and/or organization of the content

0/1 The student has clearly explained the method and findings of an empirical paper

0/1 The student has correctly cited the empirical paper according to Wikipedia guidelines, and the paper is appropriate. (i.e., it is an empirical study on development published the results in an academic journal)

Comments and Suggestions for Improvement:

While you added a single title to the article, no further edits have been made. I would suggest that you start making edits to this page soon. Any edits to this page—additions, removal of grammar and spelling mistakes, organizing the information, etc—will likely increase the quality of this page; these edits will also help you gain marks. If you have not done so already, I suggest that you find an empirical article and add the summary of it to the Wikipedia page as soon as possible. The article and a proper summary were supposed to be posted by last week at the latest.

If you have any comments, questions, or concerns, please contact me through my talk page. KassandraRoyer (talk) 21:20, 6 November 2012 (UTC)Reply

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