User talk:Dominic.fettig/sandbox
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Ian (Wiki Ed) in topic Feedback
As a response to your feedback Dominic and I edited and proof read areas of our article that were a bit sloppy. Most of this involved changing wording of some sentences and/or words.SFurcht (talk) 18:33, 30 November 2018 (UTC)
Feedback
edit@Dominic.fettig and SFurcht: Nice work on your article. Some changes you should still make before moving live
- You need to make sure that each statement in the article can be connected to a source. The lead is fine (as long as everything in the lead section is covered in the body of the article) but everything else should have references. I have added {{citation needed}} tags in places where you should have citations, but don't currently.
- Section headers should use sentence capitalization (only capitalize the first word and proper nouns) not title capitalization.
- Consider linking terms that the average reader might not be familiar with, so they can learn more about the terms you use.