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Your submission at Articles for creation: David S. Goldstein (July 5)

Latest comment: 2 months ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by SafariScribe were:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 23:17, 5 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

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Your submission at Articles for creation: David S. Goldstein (August 14)

Latest comment: 26 days ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Reconrabbit were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Almost all of the sources used are papers written by Goldstein. If there is no review or recognition of his work by independent groups or authors, his achievements cannot be discussed with a neutral point of view. To that end, the writing is overly technical (for an example of an article that is more readable with a comparable subject: Gerhard Domagk). Statements like "His work is pioneering" and "the remarkable power of 18F-dopamine PET for elucidating pathophysiological mechanisms" need to be independently referenced to justify the language used.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Recon rabbit 16:23, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: David S. Goldstein (August 28)

Latest comment: 12 days ago2 comments2 people in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Utopes were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Content keeps getting added without addressing the root of the previous declinations. Honestly I'd just remove every reference written by Goldstein; I can't imagine how any of them would contribute to demonstrating notability, and just makes the references harder to navigate. Writing papers does not make someone notable. Which three reliable, independent sources best prove the notability of the subject, per WP:NACADEMIC? Stick with those references.

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Utopes _{(talk / cont)} 00:56, 28 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the rapid response. In revising I'll pay more attention to Wikipedia's criteria, such as about prizes & awards & prestigious positions held. In references to my publications I'll focus on novelty & articles that have been widely cited or frequently read. 108.48.187.78 (talk) 02:25, 28 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

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