User talk:Drangini/articlesandbox

Peer Review

Overall I think you've got some really good information and you've done well incorperating it smoothly into the article. I like that you made a key of things that you planned to keep or delete. Based on what you have, I think you've presented enough for each section. One thing that I noticed while reading the "Distribution" section is that there seems to be a few minor spelling mistakes (i.e. the word "Philippines" and the use of "of" instead of "on" when referring to them living on corals). I would maybe expand this section a little bit if there's enough relevant information, just to give it a little more length - but honestly I think it's fine how it is. Make sure to capitalize the "H" in your species name each time you use it just to make everything uniform (I say that simply because the second time you used it in the "Astrosaponins" section it was lowercase - not a super big deal lol). I'm not sure that you necessarily need the "Parasites" section... it could be a cool additional section if you wanted to leave it and it could present the opportunity to maybe link it to the parasite's wikipage (assuming it has one).

All things considered, you're doing great! Keep it up!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by CFiss (talk • contribs) 21:35, 19 March 2019 (UTC)