Duke of Wikipädia

Your submission at Articles for creation: Maglev Cobra (June 24)

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Gusfriend (talk) 11:21, 24 June 2022 (UTC)

Thanks for your review! Well, It's what the mainstream media says, it seems to work differently from the common maglev because instead of using the electromagnetism, it freezes the material on the floor to turn it superconductive thus making it levitate, and that means it has to be fueled with liquid nitrogen everyday. If the main brazilian media isn't a reliable source, it can be deleted. Duke of Wikipädia (talk) 19:04, 24 June 2022 (UTC)

@Gusfriend Translation of the sources next to the sentence:

"A superconducting magnetic levitation train, tested in Rio a year and seven months ago, is awaiting the result of an international certification request, which could pave the way for its industrial production and commercialization. The vehicle, created by Coppe/UFRJ and in operation at Cidade Universitária, on Ilha do Fundão, is the first in the world to transport passengers with this technology. The composition, which runs on magnetized rails, with low energy consumption and no emission of pollutants, has already aroused the interest of China, which is discussing a cooperation agreement with the university."

"According to Stephan, the Maglev-Cobra is the first vehicle in the world to carry passengers, on a full scale, using magnetic levitation by superconductivity and magnets. The same technology is also being tested in China and Germany. Three other vehicles developed in Japan, China and South Korea use another form of levitation: the electromagnetic principle, which requires control loops for stabilization." Duke of Wikipädia (talk) 19:08, 24 June 2022 (UTC)

In which case the I suggest that the additional context that you provided should be in the article or the article should have a link to a separate page which provides information about the different approach. I would also expect that there are probably some academic papers referring to their work that would make a good addition to the page. Gusfriend (talk) 01:13, 25 June 2022 (UTC)

Hello, Duke of Wikipädia! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Gusfriend (talk) 11:21, 24 June 2022 (UTC)

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Maglev Cobra. Thanks! Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 00:15, 26 June 2022 (UTC)

@Johannes Maximilian Man, this wiki is the hardest ever to publish an article hahah, but I accept this challenge. Duke of Wikipädia (talk) 02:13, 26 June 2022 (UTC)

Please, take a look now and tell me what you think:[1] Duke of Wikipädia (talk) 02:58, 26 June 2022 (UTC)

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Onel5969 ^{TT me} 12:45, 26 October 2022 (UTC)