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Your submission at Articles for creation: Sony CD-i Intelligent Discman IVO-V10/V11 (July 2)

Latest comment: 2 years ago2 comments2 people in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Zxcvbnm was:

The proposed article does not have sufficient content to require an article of its own, but it could be merged into the existing article at Discman. Since anyone can edit Wikipedia, you are welcome to add that information yourself. Thank you.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Appears to merit a merge into the parent article, which remains fairly short. The list of games is for the most part duplicated at List of CD-i games and doesn't also need to be here, compatibility info could probably be added to that list if necessary.

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ᴢxᴄᴠʙɴᴍ (ᴛ) 07:51, 2 July 2022 (UTC)Reply

Hi There, Thank you for reviewing my article, I appreciate your time, consideration and for the help you’ve given,

Could I possibly ask a couple of questions if that’s alright?

Firstly is there any way in which I can improve the article enough to warrant it’s own page, I have a lot of experience with the item in question and can add more information where necessary, I just may need a bit of help with what you would class as “Important” for improvement for the article.

Secondly, The intention of the compatibility list was to show which games were compatible. The ones listed are all those that do indeed work with the system, where some do not boot or load at all, I agree however, that it is a long list, but was unsure how I could shorten it and explain in detail what games work, which is why I had added a dropdown to it.

Also, the merging Idea does appear to be a good one, there’s just a couple of issues I have with it. The Ivo V10/V11 though originally carrying the Discman logo and name, isn’t reality one at all, in the same way that the Ebook readers of the same era are.

It is a functioning multimedia Cd-I viewer, much like the Cd-i Itself, which I feel Is more likely that it could be merged better with that page instead, but it’s an odd device to place. That’s why I felt that it better sits on it’s own due to the importance of the direction and abandonment of the format and why Sony took the company in another direction before they invested their own time in computer entertainment. Also the fact that it’s one of a few systems to carry CD-i technology that wasn’t branded as Philips, is something unique where other devices of this nature differ and lastly, it’s also the only Portable Cd-i ever made for market that wasn’t branded Philips, that also has a sublime of portables such as the V12. This may not sound too important to some people, but it’s a big thing within the history of the format and multimedia devices itself and as a whole.

Again thank you for the review and advice on how I can improve it, I look forward to hearing back from you. I’ve spent quite a bit of time, research and photography on this Item and would love to see that work go somewhere. Also if it’s not too much to ask, I’d like to work with you to get this article as good as it can be, so that it can hopefully be accepted in the future.

Thank you so much and Kindest of regards. Dynamic-Gaming-Twinz (talk) 18:45, 3 July 2022 (UTC)Reply

September 2022

Latest comment: 2 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

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Your draft article, Draft:Sony CD-i Intelligent Discman IVO-V10/V11

Latest comment: 1 year ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hello, Dynamic-Gaming-Twinz. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "V11".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. ✗plicit 04:28, 3 May 2023 (UTC)Reply

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