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Hey Eileen,
I really enjoyed this stub. It seems like your source based content is phenomenal. Sources are relevant and clearly cited. There is a very broad but very thorough coverage of the topic.
The organization and style is also superb. It is chunked appropriately and maintains a neutral point of view throughout the whole article. Your sentences are clear and concise and are very engaging. You included many colorful images that are relevant and sources properly.
Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lepiree (talk • contribs) 18:07, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
Hi Eileen! I love cocktail umbrellas. They are cute and pointless and I love them. The Users page made me laugh, it's gold. I found this thing called ht Beerbrella, so check it out. Perhaps a new use to list under alternative uses? Thanks! Tia Rae13 (talk) 18:11, 17 May 2018 (UTC)