Ejells2

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:55, 10 September 2018 (UTC)

Notes

Hi! Offhand your draft looks great - my only notes would be that you need to format one of your sources, as it only comes up as a raw html link to your college's database. All we need is just the full citation for this so we can see what's being used as the source. The other thing I saw was that some of the sources are listed under the references section, but I don't know if they're being used within the draft. If they're used to source material, they should be used as in-line citations.

This is mostly nitpicky though, as I think that your draft should be ready to move once the sourcing is tweaked as mentioned above. It looks great! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:54, 20 October 2018 (UTC)