User talk:EmilyDUOregon/sandbox

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This is a bog topic and for an article titled "Deglaciation". I think the introduction is currently good in this article. A good addition would simply be finding a figure of maps showing the progression of deglaciation of North America and another series of maps for Europe. Links to articles about proglacial lakes would be good as these are events that took place during deglaciation. (Lake Agassiz for example) and outburst floods (Missoula Lake, the 8.2 ka event through Hudson Bay are two big ones). Another student is working on the Holocene Glacial Recession article (Chris Tello) and you might want to compare notes. I made a similar suggestion to him. (Note that most deglaciation occurred before the Holocene, but a lot of ice was still in Canada at 11.6 ka. It took until 7.5 ka or 7 ka to melt it all. Great effort so far!Answer.to.the.rock (talk) 15:56, 17 May 2017 (UTC)

The outline is logically structured and includes the past events. I would suggest to remained focus on the topic that will save your time. It would be more helpful if you will include the causes of deglaciation, effects of deglaciation and future perspective because it seems that it’s more focused on the previous events like the glacial maximum2001:468:D01:3088:C080:4680:4229:4E18 (talk) 19:07, 18 May 2017 (UTC)

The outline logically structures and include the past events. I would suggest to remained focus on the topic that will save your time. It would be more helpful if you will include the causes of deglaciation, effects of deglaciation and future perspective because it seems that it’s more focused on the previous events like the glacial maximumJamilabaig (talk) 19:09, 18 May 2017 (UTC)