User talk:Emkajo0216/Clothing swap

Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful!

I see you've made some changes and are starting to incorporate elements from our training, but there's still a ways to go with this article. If you're feeling stuck, please let me know how I can support you.

You might find it useful to run your article through a grammar checking program to streamline the text and eliminate errors.

It looks like you made some edits while you were putting the article into your sandbox. Is that right? I'm mostly noting this here so that we keep track and check the original version when we're grading.

Also, you don't need to keep (and won't want to keep....) the headers that were provided by the wikiedu template (lead, body, etc.). Go ahead and pull those out and use the real headers the article needs.

Some of your citations are not formatted correctly; this is a little bit of a picky problem so don't obsess over it -- sometimes this is simple to fix in the visual editor but sometimes gets complicated. Please take a look and see if you can clean these up so that the formatting is clean like the ones at the bottom of Tardigrade with links instead of URLs when possible, no 'uw.edu' library URLs, etc.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 06:45, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer review complete

Hi! I just posted the peer review for your clothing swap article. It's looking great so far :) Thanks Juliettelm (talk) 03:59, 30 January 2022 (UTC)

Go Live Approval

Hi @Emkajo0216:

Your article is approved to go live on Wikipedia.

As a reminder, here are our go-live steps:

1. Final read-through draft.
2. Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
3. Two browsers side by side, if you can. Source editing mode ("Code mode"), not visual editor.
4. Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
5. Note on article talk page.
6. Note at the top of your sandbox version.
7. Submit a link to your article on Canvas.
8. Celebrate!

Kaylea Champion (talk) 06:54, 12 February 2022 (UTC)