User talk:Epcoker/sandbox

Erika's Peer Review

I think Erika has done a great job with her article outline so far. It is clear, concise, and adds a lot to the original stub. She also has solid sources. Her topic complements mine, so I will be linking to her finished draft. As of now, I don't see anything I would change because it is in outline form.WixWix (talk) 23:17, 26 November 2017 (UTC)

Erika's peer Review 2

So far the changes that are to be made look really good, all the information that is to be added is going to make the article look much better than it is right now. With this being an outline I can't say that I would change anything, and I do think that this is a step in the right direction. Wtpillars (talk) 17:02, 27 November 2017 (UTC)