Eseahfs

November 2024

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Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicizing, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. Graham87 (talk) 15:07, 25 November 2024 (UTC)

All of your edits to articles have been undone, many of them for being promotional. Wikipedia prefers independent third-party secondary sources to assert the notability of facts (i.e. the source must be independent from the people who worked on something like a whisky glass). Regarding your edit to Grace Bussell, see my edit summary there. For more help with Wikipedia, either see the teahouse or the links below. Graham87 (talk) 15:11, 25 November 2024 (UTC)

Hello Graham, could you help me understand? Why are the references (as below) that are removed not qualify as independent third-party secondary sources. Such references include:

1. The Straits Times, National newspapers of Singapore: Chinnuswamy, Yamini (8 December 2022). Top Tipples: Whisky crystalware, Dom Perignon's new pairing menu, festive cocktails. The Straits Times. Singapore Press Holdings.
2. Robb Report, International magazine: Choo, Justin. January 11, 2023. The Lucaris Gràn Collection will change the way you drink whisky. Robb Report.
3. APAC magazine on beverage industry: Graham, Holly (November 18, 2021) Singapore whisky expert creates whisky tasting glasses with Lucaris. Drink Magazine.
4. Notable third-party drink writer in Singapore: Goh, Daniel (February 19, 2022) Reviewed: Lucaris The Gràn Collection is a grand way to taste whisky. Spirited Singapore.
5. Notable whisky writer in Hong Kong Eber, Martin (November 3, 2022) Style-specific Whisky glasses? Why not!? A review of Lucaris' new "Gràn Collection". Time For Whisky.
6. iF Design Award 2021 - Household / Tableware, Gràn Whisky Glass Collection. iF Design.
7. Tableware International Awards 2022 Ocean Glass is the winner of the Fine Glassware category with The GRAN Collection. Tableware International.

Eseahfs (talk) 03:40, 27 November 2024 (UTC)

Because they're being used in a promotional manner. Tell me: do you have a personal connection with Matthew Fergusson-Stewart or any of his family,? Graham87 (talk) 16:01, 27 November 2024 (UTC)

Hey Graham87,

A.

For Glassware edits: Is there a way we can on this portion? Can you help me relook into the deletion? I have edited based on facts, and all editions were duly referenced:

1. The glassware is a new shape and form. It has received third-party acknowledgement by iF award and Tableware award for its different bowl and mouth sizes, and usage, and covered by reputable publications.
2. Language used is neutral and non-promotional. No laudatory term was used. I was extremely cautious about this.
3. Sources / references cited are credible and independent.

B.

As for Dr James Edmund Fergusson Stewart: Would you like to write something about him? Or can we create a stub or collaborate on this. He has been dead since 1937 for 87 years. Besides Drake-Brockman and Bussell, the related Stewart family is also an interesting part of Western Australia history. Unfortunately, there is no content on them as historic figures in Perth. His descendent Athole Stewart - a war veteran, also authored a book Let's Get Cracking: The Malayan Campaign published by F. Johnson in 1943.

An autographed photo of Dr James Edmund Fergusson Stewart can be found in State Library Western Australia. There also an exhibition of his family supported by Museum of Perth. Eseahfs (talk) 04:51, 28 November 2024 (UTC)

Thanks but no thanks. And you haven't answered my question about any connection with the Fergusson-Stewarts; it's curious that all your edits have related to that family and you seem to know a lot about them. Pinging Belbury, who has also undone your edits. Graham87 (talk) 14:56, 28 November 2024 (UTC)

I note the conflict of interest. I read further. So, do I Edit COI and file in Category:Wikipedia conflict of interest edit requests? The glassware is designed by my husband but edits are factual and references, independent. Essentially, it is about the stemware that takes on new different shape to others.

Also about Dr JE, I find such historical personalities intriguing as it offers another facet to Australia history beyond common misconception of a convict settlement. Eseahfs (talk) 05:11, 29 November 2024 (UTC)

Yes, that's correct re the edit request, on the article's talk page. If you want to pursue your editing interests, please do so on someone other than people related to your husband (or yourself, if applicable). Graham87 (talk) 06:23, 29 November 2024 (UTC)

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Happy editing! Graham87 (talk) 15:11, 25 November 2024 (UTC)