User talk:Evagebel/sandbox

Good job! The edits were neutral and I think you got all the important information in. In the first paragraph I reworded a couple sentences to make them less "wordy." I did not delete the original sentences in case you don't like the edits. Also, to help with the flow I would maybe rearrange the first paragraph and talk about what musician's earplugs are and then at the end mention the different types. I think this would flow better into the second paragraph that goes into more detail about the different types. Marietta.mathis (talk) 20:25, 3 March 2017 (UTC)