User talk:Fed.fashion/sandbox

Latest comment: 4 years ago by CKuhnH

I like the structure of your article, the picture is also great, I also like the combination of her being AfroDutch. I am puzzled what is AfroDutch, so it might be a good idea to link that to some reference even if it is within Wikipedia, it helps the readers. Also, I suggest citing your sources, the references, it strikes me as difficult that you have generated all this text without accessing any external information, so do include it. Remember that if you do not acknowledge the sources you are incurring in plagiarism even though it is not deliberate. Well done for your work so far! --CKuhnH (talk) 10:19, 7 January 2020 (UTC)Reply