User talk:Fernbush/sandbox

This article sandbox is very good. I was impressed by how much it added and shocked to see such a blank original article. I was wondering if she took her husbands name and if that means she should be referred to by that after her marriage is mentioned? It obviously will be decided by whether or not she took the name because it is possible she did not or it is not mentioned in sources. Other than that small note, the sources were strong and the material was greatly improved. Also I completed the peer review a few days ago and did not realize to post comments here so apologies for that if you did not see it.

Additionally, maybe a sections with her styles/influences would be beneficial or some more examples of her work. It is not necessary, but simply an idea to emphasize her work more.

2601:14F:C201:30B6:502E:2C0F:880B:6949 (talk) 03:31, 6 July 2020 (UTC)Sarita3940

@Sarita3940: Thank you for your feedback. I'm glad you brought up the confusion with Elsie and her husband's last name because I saw a ton of disagreements when I was doing my research. I will review the documents and add a couple sentences to clarify. I didn't find enough information to create an entire section dedicated to her styles/influences, but that would definitely be a great addition to the page if that was eventually added.

Thanks again for your help. Fernbush (talk) 02:14, 7 July 2020 (UTC)