ForestGreenSweater
Roses are red, Violets are blue, Your Sweater is green and your coat is too. AcevedoBarga (talk) 16:18, 19 February 2016 (UTC)
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editIt's me. Iamastudent (talk) 16:19, 19 February 2016 (UTC)
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:44, 19 February 2016 (UTC)
Mud Ring Fishing
edit-possibly add a section or some info about species they do this to -could get more specific where this happens (lower coast of Florida - but where specifically?) -add pictures of the process - either step by step or just of major parts like the mud ring itself -example of altruism in dolphins -pod/group behavior in dolphins - stick together like during mass strandings -comparable behavior in other species/animals? -what species of bottlenose dolphin? Is it just one species? (Species name) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wiki von Staats (talk • contribs) 15:21, 25 March 2016 (UTC)
You did a really good job of describing the technique: I can visualize it really well.
Minor edits:
- " Dolphins use this specific technique to foraging and trap" should be either "to forage for and trap" or "for foraging and trapping"
- It strikes me as a bit odd to use he/his pronouns. Perhaps they/their or it/its would be more appropriate.
- The last sentence in the lead paragraph seems run-on-y and needs some editing