Your submission at Articles for creation: Moira Ness (October 15)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Hoary was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Hoary (talk) 08:02, 15 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
 
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Hello Friendslayer! I saw your recent article was declined. I think I can help rewrite it in a way that will get it passed through AfC as the artist and their work has been the focus of several media articles. While technically it's Wikipedia and I don't need to ask permission I feel that since you got it started I don't want to just go in and start making a bunch of edits. Let me know if you're still working on it or want to work on it together. Take care TheMusicExperimental (talk) 21:06, 23 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

Hi Friendslayer, I put a stub in place on the Talk page and we can continue to discuss the content of the page there. I think with a little bit of re-write and framing we can establish the notability of the subject based references to the two interviews, Toronto Art Fair, and the Photo magazine. From there it's mostly cleaning up the language to be more neutral in tone. Reviewers often spike new articles for sounding too promotional. Which isn't to say that anything needs to be negative, just that it can't be too positive either, just descriptive. TheMusicExperimental (talk) 18:34, 7 November 2020 (UTC)Reply

Concern regarding Draft:Moira Ness

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  Hello, Friendslayer. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Moira Ness, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Draft space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for article space.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 09:01, 17 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your draft article, Draft:Moira Ness

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Hello, Friendslayer. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Moira Ness".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! Iflaq (talk) 08:12, 15 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Moira Ness (February 12)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MurielMary was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
MurielMary (talk) 02:54, 12 February 2022 (UTC)Reply

Your draft article, Draft:Moira Ness

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Hello, Friendslayer. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Moira Ness".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 02:54, 12 August 2022 (UTC)Reply