User talk:Fukhunglie/Stein Valley Nlaka'pamux Heritage Park

class peer review

Hey all, loved your work on the article. Information wise is very strong, sticks the the content and stays neutral when talking of conflict. Would benefit from images in the Geography section of the page. Citation wise theres also of red missing lines in your references that just need to be polished up if only including a (N.D) for some. I would suggest for the park management , recreation and ecology section there is a heavy reliance on a footnote citation one and while it is a solid webpage that probably had all the info you looking for the majority of the subheading rely on this citation alone if you could find other sources to back up those it would make your points stronger. The park management heading may also fit better under the Indigenous relations heading as they connect to one another. Lead heading could also include more information on the sub headings. Good luck for the rest of it! Tardis420 (talk) 23:19, 14 October 2023 (UTC)