Gailvila
Thank you for your work on the Florida Everblades article. I have posted on the talk page there what I think would be a better wording for the two sentences in the lead paragraph that I had identified as containing weasel words. Please take a look at it and let me know what you think. Cheers. Cjmclark (Contact) 17:39, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
Also, if you're going to be editing a lot of ice hockey articles, I'd suggest that you check out WikiProject Ice Hockey. They have a lot of helpful pointers on article structure and layout, as well as notability guidelines that can help you avoid creating articles that get quickly deleted for not meeting notability criteria (this happens with a lot of player articles, especially at the minor league level). If you have any questions, I'd also be happy to answer them as best I can or direct you to someone who can if I cannot. Cjmclark (Contact) 18:04, 14 October 2011 (UTC)