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Latest comment: 8 years ago by Vellichor in topic Draft feedback

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Latest comment: 8 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Good references.

Sentences are well written and informative. Be careful of a few things:

  • You say ESS's several times - it should be ESSs.

Overall great start! Vellichor (talk) 01:59, 5 November 2015 (UTC)Reply

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