Geochem8
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Cheers ! Welcome to wiki... wishing you luck on your article :) Spongebubble94 (talk) 21:49, 21 February 2017 (UTC) |
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Peer Review
editHi, I will be reviewing your and Bryochemist's page. It will be either by tonight or early tomorrow morning. Bananabread7 (talk) 18:32, 14 April 2017 (UTC)
Peer Review
editDear Geochem8,
I think that the subsections under the Geological History section could be changed a bit. The title, being Geological History, does not seem to match with the hypotheses in the subsections. Either the title of the section or the subsections could be changed.
Some sections seem to be lacking citations. For example the whole subsection Gullies lacks citations.
Overall, the article seems to be easy to understand and descriptive without being unnecessarily wordy. It seems to be on a good track to be edited into the main article. Bananabread7 (talk) 00:29, 16 April 2017 (UTC)
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editGeochem8,
You've added a substantial amount of information to the article Acidalia Planitia. The way that you've reorganized the sections with mud volcanoes and gullies being part of a larger section about geographical features is logical and will make further expansion of the article easy. I think that having geological history as its own section makes sense but that the introduction to that section could perhaps be slightly longer. This could serve to perhaps make more clear what features of Acidalia Planitia are explained by each of them. I think that removing many of the images of the gullies and the mud volcanoes was appropriate as there were too many of them with no textual explanation. The pictures that you did retain serve well at providing examples of what they look like.