User talk:GideonTrismegistus/Elizabeth and Mary Kirby

Peer Review from Samuel Krumpe Sekrumpe (talk) 02:43, 21 March 2022 (UTC) It looks like you've made some quality additions so far, which are all presented in an appropriate neutral manner. Reference footnotes are included properly and often, and it seems like all of the links work in the article.

Peer Review Response:

Thank you for the review, apologies for the disorganization. I have now updated the sandbox to be better organized which I plan on continuing with further additions.

I am hoping to organize the sections better, including adding a new section for the ways that they popularized science. I am glad you felt the tone was neutral, it has been difficult to word things as objectively as possible. References have also been a little messy and I hope to condense some of the repeated references in the future. I also hope to include further information on their lives together, particularly it glosses over Elizabeth's death and the impact it had on the rest of Mary's life and work. GideonTrismegistus (talk) 15:32, 25 March 2022 (UTC)