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Maharana Bhupal Government Hospital moved to draftspace

Thanks for your contributions to Maharana Bhupal Government Hospital. Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it needs more sources to establish notability and it is promotional and reads like an advertisement. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.

Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. Helpful Raccoon (talk) 22:25, 13 August 2024 (UTC)

Thank you so much for the feedback. I will try to find more reliable sources for this article and make it sound more natural. Also, can you help me find any policy that explains what type of content is considered promotional or advertising? Gj2020 (talk) 21:06, 14 August 2024 (UTC)

See WP:NOTPROMO and MOS:PUFFERY, which should hopefully give some idea of what is not allowed. The phrase "With a dedicated team of doctors, nurses, and support staff, MB Hospital continues its legacy of providing high-quality healthcare, upholding its mission to serve the people of Rajasthan with compassion and excellence." is one example of a promotional phrase filled with puffery. Do you have a connection to this hospital? Helpful Raccoon (talk) 21:15, 14 August 2024 (UTC)

Again thank you for the help. I'll read both policies and will try to write it again if I find any more reliable source, otherwise I think I'll put it on hold for now. And not I don't have any connection with it as it's government hospital, Just wanted to write about it cause it's Udaipur's Biggest Goverment hospital that's all. Gj2020 (talk) 21:27, 14 August 2024 (UTC)