Gmoniyee

Eng 22 Class Page

See the Eng 22 class page here: User:Eng22

Welcome

Welcome!

Hello, Gmoniyee, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

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I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your messages on discussion pages using four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Wikipedia:Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask your question on this page and then place {{helpme}} before the question. Again, welcome! Cheers. _{Trance addict - Armin van Buuren - Oceanlab} 23:11, 8 July 2008 (UTC)

Good job!

Good job posting your intro to Wikipedia.

==Mr Turner --Eng22 (talk) 04:10, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

1st draft comments

Good start so far with the article.

Suggestions:

• Rewrite the first sentence to read: Civil War Rifles came in many kinds.

• Good job listing sources in your Works Cited section. In addition to the URLs (website addresses), You need to add information for each source (author [if any], title(s), date(s).

Refer to the following for overall guidance on writing the article.

• Wikipedia:Good_article_criteria
• MLA citation style

==Mr Turner --Eng22 (talk) 20:06, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

Keep working at it!

You need to add references to your article.

For more information about this, see the section of Wikipedia about parenthetical citation.

Also, see if you can add a picture to your article. David can help you. Or you want to try it yourself, see Wikipedia:Picture_tutorial

==Mr Turner --Eng22 (talk) 08:06, 15 July 2008 (UTC)