User talk:Gog the Mild/sandbox3

• Aside from general introductory material, you need to delete material that is fully covered in the main cog article and focus on what makes these different from ordinary cogs
• Forex, the lede needs to be heavily refocused as a summary of the main body with a lot less specific detail, but that can wait. There's a reason why I generally write the lede last.
• I don't think that we really need to cover the construction except for whatever differences warships might have had from ordinary cogs
• Are the larger cogs generally warships, or at least armed for self-protection? Or don't we know?
• Are there any illustrations available for war cogs in profile specifically?
• Give the general lack of technical info available specifically on cog warships, the real meat of this is obviously going to be on their use and you should probably have a 1 or 2-paragraph summary of their activities in each of the battles that you've listed here.
• Be sure to discuss how their lack of maneuverability could leave them stranded in port for months at a time and how that impacted campaigning.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:42, 4 September 2019 (UTC)