GreenPlumber

I am attempting to create a wikipage for my company. I have no intention of blatant advertising. I am a noob at this and just trying to get a page that is factual and encyclopedic in nature posted. Below is what I have created so far, and would appreciate any feedback.

Please read WP:COI, WP:Corp, WP:Spam, WP:RS and WP:YFA. – ukexpat (talk) 03:05, 26 March 2009 (UTC)

Draft article

I moved the draft article to a user sandbox at User:GreenPlumber/Sandbox, as your talk page is not the appropriate place for it.  – ukexpat (talk) 13:13, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

A couple of comments: the draft still reads like a promotional piece - for example, using the circle-R symbol is a dead giveaway that the article has been written by someone with a close connection to the company. Close connections almost always lead to non-neutral/promotional articles, even if that is not the intention. Also you user name is in clear breach of the user name policy as a spamname. You should either make a request to change it at WP:CHU or just abandon it and create a new account with a user name that complies with policy. Hope this helps.  – ukexpat (talk) 13:19, 18 June 2009 (UTC)