User talk:Gstew42/sandbox

Hello Gstew42, I'd like to say your subject is a great addition to Wikipedia. I say this because I myself try day to day to become more aware of African American culture and current issues that fail to be addressed. This addition will give insight for those who can not relate to how black and white feminism differs. One suggestion that I have is giving more details about what Susan B. Anthony and Elizabeth Lady Stanton stood for. However, maybe it is the reader's duty to research more on Anthony or Stanton. Great job!ElgeStevens (talk) 02:06, 3 November 2017 (UTC)

Jonathan Clark Peer review

Background Section: Over the past 400+ years(ADD COMMA)--Jclark17 (talk) 03:33, 3 November 2017 (UTC) in predominantly white societies, issues of/with(TAKE OFF OF/)--Jclark17 (talk) 03:33, 3 November 2017 (UTC) black women have continuously not been talked about, so the true historical struggles of black women are not widely known. Black women (REPLACE BLACK FOR AFRICAN-AAMERICAN)--Jclark17 (talk) 03:33, 3 November 2017 (UTC) have always been viewed as a different "kind/type" of woman than white women. White women in the nineteenth and twentieth centuries were not expected to work and were just expected to stay at home and take care of the kids and the house because they were always seen as too delicate to go out and work a job. But, black women were expected to work all day, come home and cook, then take care of the kids and the house. Society never let black women be as "feminine" or delicate as white women, so they always had to carry a heavier social workload. This is how black women have been perceived since the 1700s during slavery, so by the time the first wave of feminism came around, black women and their issues were not included in the feminist movement. Elizabeth Lady Stanton and Susan B. Anthony prioritized their suffrage over black men, so black women were not even a consideration to receive suffrage. Now, in these third and fourth waves of feminism, it is nice to say that black women are treated the same as white women, but this is not always the case. Within the feminist movements, white women are overall still at the forefront and still discuss issues that directly affect them. So, the issues that are specific to minority women are still being pushed to the side as they were in the first wave of feminism. Carby, Hazel V. “White Women Listen! Black Feminism and the Boundaries of Sisterhood.” The Empire Strikes Back: Race and Racism in 70s Britain, 1982, pp. 212–235.

For the most part this is a great addition to the article, but watch out for the over using of the word and. --Jclark17 (talk) 03:33, 3 November 2017 (UTC) I agree this is a great addition to the article but is it possible for you to source out where you retrieved this information that you are adding so that it is not perceived as personal opinion or suggestion.Sym.Jones32 (talk) 23:52, 3 November 2017 (UTC)

Asja Thompson Peer Review

I’d firstly like to comment that I really enjoy your topic and look forward to learning more about it through your contribution to Wikipedia. However, I would like to recommend possibly adding more specifics and details. Currently, I feel as though the information is really surface level. I think you can go in depth more with the ideas. A suggestion could be examples, cases, or instances included in black women were perceived differently from white women. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Asj'a Thompson (talk • contribs) 05:10, 8 November 2017 (UTC)