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-History and information of Kizer lake -Lake Sassaginaga -Nathen Pierson- Human Resource elite major- Cincinnati Ohio

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Your title is good, short, and simple. The first sentence is useful and describes what the article is about very well. The lead section is a clear summary about what the article has in store for the reader. The article is written well in your own words and is clear and easy to read for a non-expert. The article is very fact based and unbiased, so it's good for Wikipedia. The article has good consistent formatting with the rest of Wikipedia. The biggest problem with this article is that there are no sources or citations. Make sure to finish adding the sources and citations for the website. — Preceding unsigned comment added by GermF (talk • contribs) 01:27, 12 December 2019 (UTC)