User talk:Hires an editor/Essay

This is a strong start, but I think it could be better organized. In particular, the paragraph beginning "Wikipedia has also made me better..." starts off in one direction but then goes on a tangent.--ragesoss (talk) 15:16, 5 October 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! It does need improving, so I'll work on it, and happily take advice. Of course, you're also welcome to throw something in there, too. Hires an editor (talk) 22:06, 5 October 2009 (UTC)