Horrorfanxoxo231
Joined 12 September 2018
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Chronophoto in topic Khadija al-Salami
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:56, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
Khadija al-Salami
editMinor changes necessary.
- This draft is a good start. You good sources and have added a lot of new content.
- Right now it's not clear how your new sentences will fit with the existing sentences. When you move your text to mainspace, try to interweave your next text into the existing text. Don't simply delete the existing text.
- I recommend revising the section headings to the following: Early Life and Education, Career (which will include the section currently titled Biography in the existing page + the section titled Filmography on your draft), Awards and Nominations (IMDB lists several for this filmmaker), Filmography (which should just be a list or table of films), References, and then External Links (for the links that are sitting in the existing page's References section). Delete the colons (:) in the section titles.
- Film titles should always be in italics, not in quotes.
- The period goes before the footnote number.
- Develop the lead section so that it clearly demonstrates al-Salami's notability and doesn't include any extraneous information.
- The references are missing key information. Always include the author's name, full name of the publisher, and date of publication, if available.