Hwantaw

Concern regarding Draft:Final Profit: A Shop RPG

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 11:06, 4 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Final Profit: A Shop RPG (March 18)

Latest comment: 8 months ago3 comments2 people in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Vrxces was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
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Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Great start on this page. I think the article needs a little work. The most important issues are that the game lacks a reception section, which is normally seen as a litmus test for general notability. There's no rule of thumb, but generally WP:THREE reviews from reliable sources is seen as enough to show the game merits an article. You may also like to add in the awards in this section. Check out other video game articles on how to do this. Please check out the manual of style for the standard approach with video game articles which might provide some guidance. Some miscellaneous feedback irrelevant to the decline is to avoid second-person tense and informal contractions to keep in line with the encyclopedic style.

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ＶＲＸＣＥＳ (talk) 07:21, 18 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the feedback and suggestions, I'll continue working on it taking those into account. Hwantaw (talk) 07:32, 18 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Final Profit: A Shop RPG (March 24)

Latest comment: 8 months ago2 comments2 people in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Zxcvbnm was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Not seeing WP:GNG being passed here, not enough reviews from WP:RS.

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ᴢxᴄᴠʙɴᴍ (ᴛ) 17:09, 24 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

The game is in an odd position of not having received any scored reviews, but having been recognized at several notable awards ceremonies. I've added some relevant details to the reception field, including a developer interview by Game Developer (Magazine) and some award listings from Rock Paper Shotgun and Press Start. Hwantaw (talk) 18:09, 24 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Final Profit: A Shop RPG (March 29)

Latest comment: 8 months ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Vrxces was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Unfortunately as below the reviews for the game are slightly short to assess the game as notable. It seems SUPERJUMP generally hasn't been assessed per WP:VG/S, and there's nothing on Metacritic, so a deep dive might be needed. I also note it's an Australian game so there might be some local coverage, although some of the outlets like Checkpoint and Well Played aren't too well recognised for editors outside here. Hope we can find a way to make this notable!

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ＶＲＸＣＥＳ (talk) 03:02, 29 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

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