User talk:Hypermole115/Covet (Band)
Latest comment: 9 months ago by Hypermole115 in topic Draft
Sandbox Draft
editHi Professor,
Just a reminder that I have uploaded my draft of the band, Covet, that I have been following for a while. Let me know what changes you want me to do!
Thanks,
Adriel Hypermole115 (talk) 18:38, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
Draft
editThis is a good draft. I would get rid of the lists in the lead and just use sentence, i.e. "Current band members include: Smith, Jones, etc." Before sprucing up, you should cite your sources inline - - i.e. use the "cite" button to insert footnotes and include a works cited at bottom of page. ProfHanley (talk) 17:33, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
- Current band members include: Smith, Jones, O'Reilly. Hypermole115 (talk) 20:08, 7 November 2023 (UTC)