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Your submission at Articles for creation: Sustainable jewellery (June 21)

Latest comment: 8 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

WP articles are factual only, and are not the same as wp:essays or magazine articles. Do not editorialize, as in "major collective challenges" "most remarkable feature" "the consumer is very demanding". Read a number of articles to understand the appropriate tone.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Sustainable jewellery and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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LaMona (talk) 04:51, 21 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Hello! I.cava, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! LaMona (talk) 04:51, 21 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sustainable jewellery (July 11)

Latest comment: 8 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Tokyogirl79 was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This still has issues with promotional language and I note that some of the phrases that were highlighted by the prior reviewer weren't even removed. I need to stress that this is too promotional at present and it's extremely unlikely that it will be accepted in this format, even without looking at whether or not there is enough sourcing to establish notability. If this is accepted in its current format then it'd stand an extremely strong chance of getting speedily deleted from Wikipedia as unambiguous promotion. I have to stress that this needs to be edited to be less promotional. WP:TEAHOUSE can help you on this if you need one on one help. Offhand this will need an almost complete re-write and you'll also likely need to remove most (if not all) of the websites in the external links section. Wikipedia is not a place to promote something and the article just kind of comes across as something to promote the sites listed in the EL section and get people to buy sustainable jewelry - which is not what Wikipedia is for.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Sustainable jewellery and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page.
You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Tokyogirl79 (｡◕‿◕｡) 10:01, 11 July 2016 (UTC)Reply

Managing a conflict of interest

Latest comment: 8 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hello, I.cava. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places, or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a COI may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic, and it is important when editing Wikipedia articles that such connections be completely transparent. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. In particular, we ask that you please:

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In addition, you must disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation (see WP:PAID).

Please take a few moments to read and review Wikipedia's policies regarding conflicts of interest, especially those pertaining to neutral point of view, sourcing and autobiographies. Thank you. Tokyogirl79 (｡◕‿◕｡) 10:01, 11 July 2016 (UTC)Reply

Draft:Sustainable jewellery concern

Latest comment: 6 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Sustainable jewellery, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:33, 11 May 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your draft article, Draft:Sustainable jewellery

Latest comment: 6 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hello, I.cava. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Sustainable jewellery".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. » Shadowowl | talk 13:39, 11 June 2018 (UTC)Reply

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