User talk:Isha9/sandbox

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Hey, Isha! I agree with you on the recommendations you made regarding the article, and really like what you have so far. You claim that internet access slowed down after leadership transferred, but I would recommend that you add in another phrase about how/why that happened. If you can find anymore information about the rate at which internet users are growing (the end of the paragraph), that might be a useful addition too! Good luck! Sweet inaara (talk) 01:04, 23 March 2018 (UTC)

Hi Inaara! Sweet inaara Thank you for your suggestions! After looking at your advice, I did more research, and realized that I am not yet completely sure of what I had written about how internet access slowed down after the leadership change. To prevent any false information, I changed it to talk more about how while the internet speed has generally been slow, there definitely is more internet penetration BUT people's freedom to say whatever they want/freedom of speech has slowed down after the leadership transferred. Also, due to your suggestion, I found some information about the growing rate of internet users which I added to my little blurb in my sandbox. I have it there for now, but I think that I will probably move that sentence or elaborate in the actual section of the article titled "Internet Penetration." Thanks again!! Isha9 (talk) 01:02, 1 April 2018 (UTC)