Izonly
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Chief Jim Billy
editThere are a remarkably large number of problems with this article, . I reviewed it, indicating some of them,, and you have been fixing some; I urge you to continue. But you are still making several errors: You may not use Wikipedia as a reference for anything in an article. We are not a Reliable source; what you do is make a link to the article with [[ ]] . One thing I had not gotten to yet was the proper wsay of expressing references. We place them in the text within <ref> </ref> tags, and then they automatically appear in a references section in the bottom, I leave it to you to learn the proper style, and to move them accordingly. Another thing I had not gotten to was integrated the chronology into the text. We say things once, not twice. I leave this for you also. Yet another thing that needs fixing as well is the addition for references for the various biographical facts in the article--I believe the source for most of them is the Sun Sentinel article. I apologize for introducing some typographical errors. As for the rest, I'll check back. Isuggest reading WP:FIRST for an introduction to Wikipedia style. DGG ( talk ) 23:41, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
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