War Machine from here, 2010-12-07
Items of change:
- Infobox
- Layout cleanup of the template
- Avoid the template redirect
- Replace caption with
{{Descript-cvr-art}} - Remove "(as Rhodes)" as redundant
{{cn}}middle name- Remove non-super hero teams and non-fictional groups
- Remove teams the character wasn't a member of
- Simplify millitary trainng comment
- Remove "Mach 3" - nigh impossible to attribute precise valuse to fictional equipment or abilities.
- convert to character and title
- Lead
- Remove "Rupert" as not part of either common name for the character. Not a bio of a real person, so improper for the lead.
- "comic book superhero" is redundant in the over all lead. Simplify to "superhero" (also questionable)
- Clarify credits as per [1] and [2]
- Remove the "Rhodey" aside
- Simplify down the IoM paragraph of the lead. This can be expanded in a paragraph in the IoM section or merging the IoM article back in.
- Expand 2 paragraph to includ rough comic book usage
- Publication history
- Expand for real world context of the flow of the character.
- Place the refs in
{{cite web}}
- Origins
- Middle name and place of birth removed as irrelvent, or extreamly trivial at best, with in the works of fiction.
- Copy edit to put into the "ever present now" and remove unneeded detailes.
- Round out cite
current
edit- The all new Iron Man