User talk:Jargu006/sandbox

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Kaelyn Ramirez

Hello, great work so far! Your first paragraph was a really solid introduction and background to your topic. I also think its great that you included pictures to help give the reader an idea of where these places were. My main suggestions/comments are just to sometime go back and check your grammar and spacing. Second, I believe there is a word count minimum for this assignment (650 words) so be sure that when you submit your final post that it reaches that minimum. To help reach that word count, I was interested in your last paragraph when you mentioned evidence of fossils and stone tools, maybe you could elaborate on that and mention any common species/fossils found in these areas. Kaelyn Ramirez (talk) 23:14, 15 May 2020 (UTC)Reply