User talk:Jasmine123171/sandbox

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Krob18 in topic Peer Review

"The Raspberry Pi Foundation is a UK-based charity that works to put the power of digital making into the hands of people all over the world, so they are capable of understanding and shaping our increasingly digital world, able to solve the problems that matter to them, and equipped for the jobs of the future. We provide low-cost, high-performance computers that people use to learn, solve problems and have fun. We provide outreach and education to help more people access computing and digital making. We develop free resources to help people learn about computing and how to make things with computers, and train educators who can guide other people to learn." Foundation, Raspberry Pi. “Raspberry Pi - Teach, Learn, and Make with Raspberry Pi.” Rotate Display 90º? - Raspberry Pi Forums, www.raspberrypi.org/.

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Hi Jasmine. I think your article is off to a good start. In the beginning, you mention there are various models of Raspberry PI. It would be interesting if you expand on that and include what’s different about the models. I would also include a link to other Wiki articles that explain what open and closed source systems are for readers who may not know. That way you don’t have to include it in your article, but there an easy way for a reader to find out. Krob18 (talk) 23:20, 23 October 2018 (UTC)Reply