Jasvind Singh

Your submission at Articles for creation: Flash Coffee (May 21)

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Theroadislong (talk) 07:11, 21 May 2022 (UTC)

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Your submission at Articles for creation

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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• If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to the submission, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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Jasvind Singh (talk) 08:15, 21 May 2022 (UTC)

Hi based on the feedback received, I have made edits to the article I submitted previously by removing statements like "fastest growing", "affordable prices", "Customers can use the Flash Coffee app to order and pay online, choosing to pick up their order at one of Flash Coffee’s striking yellow storefronts, or opt for delivery through major platforms in each market. Flash Coffee recently launched in-app delivery in Singapore, and will progressively roll it out across all their other markets." as this made the article sound like an advertistment. Do let me know if this is good now or if there are any statements that i should remove to make the article sound neutral.

paid editing

Hello Jasvind Singh. The nature of your edits gives the impression you have an undisclosed financial stake in promoting a topic, but you have not complied with Wikipedia's mandatory paid editing disclosure requirements. Paid advocacy is a category of conflict of interest (COI) editing that involves being compensated by a person, group, company or organization to use Wikipedia to promote their interests. Undisclosed paid advocacy is prohibited by our policies on neutral point of view and what Wikipedia is not, and is an especially serious type of COI; the Wikimedia Foundation regards it as a "black hat" practice akin to black-hat search-engine optimization.

Paid advocates are very strongly discouraged from direct article editing, and should instead propose changes on the talk page of the article in question if an article exists. If the article does not exist, paid advocates are extremely strongly discouraged from attempting to write an article at all. At best, any proposed article creation should be submitted through the articles for creation process, rather than directly.

Regardless, if you are receiving or expect to receive compensation for your edits, broadly construed, you are required by the Wikimedia Terms of Use to disclose your employer, client and affiliation. You can post such a mandatory disclosure to your user page at User:Jasvind Singh. The template {{Paid}} can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form: {{paid|user=Jasvind Singh|employer=InsertName|client=InsertName}}. If I am mistaken – you are not being directly or indirectly compensated for your edits – please state that in response to this message. Otherwise, please provide the required disclosure. In either case, do not edit further until you answer this message. Theroadislong (talk) 08:17, 21 May 2022 (UTC)

Hi Theroadislong, yes I am not being paid, directly or indirectly to make edits. I'm employed by Flash Coffee and just helping to get our Wikipedia page up like how our other brands has it, Starbucks, The Coffee Bean and Tea Leaf etc. I'm not benefiting in any way by having this article up neither is Flash Coffee compensating me to create this article. In any case, I want this article to be as neutral as possible, so I'm willing to make any changes as per Wikipedia guideline.

Do let me know if i still have to add the template into my profile disclosure. Jasvind Singh (talk) 08:28, 21 May 2022 (UTC)

I also dont have any financial stake in the company Jasvind Singh (talk) 08:29, 21 May 2022 (UTC)

If you work for the company then you are deemed to be a paid editor and need to make the required disclosure on your user page. Theroadislong (talk) 08:30, 21 May 2022 (UTC)

I have made the disclosure on my profile now. Hope its good now Jasvind Singh (talk) 08:35, 21 May 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Flash Coffee (May 22)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Bonadea were: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Flash Coffee and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Flash Coffee, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
• If you do not make any further changes to your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
• If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

bonadea contributions talk 16:24, 22 May 2022 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Flash Coffee

Hello, Jasvind Singh. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Flash Coffee, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 11:02, 3 November 2022 (UTC)