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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (November 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MatthewVanitas was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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MatthewVanitas (talk) 03:25, 19 November 2014 (UTC)

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Peer Review

Sorry I didn't get this posted earlier. I was confused on where this needed to be sent. I hope that this information will help you (and that this is the right place).
Here is my peer review for the article: (1) The article does contain important information for both general and scientific audiences. However, attempts to mix it and define everything, I feel, takes away a bit from the professional feel. This I find especially in “Heavy Chain (larger peptide subunit)” etc. (2) I feel like there can be a better transition to the second paragraph. It lacks a topic sentence to understand what will be contained there. In the third paragraph, there could be a better integration of what the different targeted proteins are. The current flow seems rather stuttered. (3) Length for each section does seem good. (4) I believe that the sections are well balanced. (5) It does satisfy aims. (6) The terms are linked well in general. “Proteolytic cleavage” could be a good term to link. (7) The image does help, but I did notice that the exact same figure is found already on the Botulinium toxin page. (8) The references are good. (9) I believe that “Light Chain” and “Heavy Chain” should both be lower case. In paragraph three, it says “BoNT/C Also…”; the “also” should be lower case. There are times that it feels a bit wordy with a lot of “this results in”, or “by doing so”, etc. A more clear and concise description could improve clarity. (10) All of the assigned criteria is satisfied. However, I need to add, I am not sure that I see this fitting well in the article on SNARE proteins. A brief overview of this information would probably be sufficient, especially since there is a page on Botulinium toxin. Some of this information might be better integrated there. TSto1 (talk) 07:23, 20 November 2014 (UTC)

Your draft article, User:Jbdbaseball/sandbox

Hello, Jbdbaseball. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "sandbox".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 20:22, 26 May 2015 (UTC)