Hi Joey, I love the edits you made. They are very clear and concise and really display a deep understanding of the topic! I like how at the bottom of your edits you have planned out what you are going to do next- so its easy to see where you are going with the edits. I would try adding pictures or something else to make the page pop a little more. As of right now it is very very text heavy
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