User talk:Jedidiah.e.obomighie/sandbox
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Ian (Wiki Ed) in topic Feedback
Lead Section Comments:
- I think you gave a good description of what the overall test is about
- I like that you added steps and a process for how the general sense of the test works
- This section could be expanded by listing other contributing scientists and methods for the test\
- Add more detail/background. It was on the shorter side
- Good sources
Lead section comments for Jordan Port:
- The description about what the topic was direct and to the point.
- You gave ways in which the test could be presented to the subject.
- There were no paragraphs which I think could be added to give the lead section a better presentation.
- I believe more points could be added to the section. The section was a bit too short and the information given wasn't enough.Jedidiah.e.obomighie (talk) 10:05, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
Feedback
edit@Jedidiah.e.obomighie, Sarah.olson.1, and JordanPorteous: Nice work. A few final fixes
- The year on the Edward Thorndike ref (#5) is 190. I think you're missing a digit :)
- Bold the article title, and nothing else. Only use italics for things like book titles.
- Add some links to other articles - terms or people that the average user might be unfamiliar with the first time they appear should be bolded.
- Only capitalize proper nouns. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:02, 7 December 2018 (UTC)