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An article you recently created, Tom Naumann (musician), is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Pridemanty (talk) 12:50, 21 February 2022 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tom Naumann (musician) (March 11)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Tom Naumann (musician) (March 13)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Mako001 was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Mako001 (C)  (T)  🇺🇦 11:54, 13 March 2022 (UTC)Reply
What percentage of the cited sources do you (personally) "think" is unreliable? Thank you. JensOhle (talk) 12:14, 13 March 2022 (UTC)Reply
Any feedback? JensOhle (talk) 11:27, 20 March 2022 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tom Naumann (musician) (March 20)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by AngusWOOF were:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
AngusW🐶🐶F (barksniff) 12:44, 20 March 2022 (UTC)Reply
"Do not cite discogs." ... the first article I opened by random choice (Steve Vai): third quote "Steve Vai (main discography)". Discogs. Archived from the original on March 10, 2016. Retrieved November 23, 2015."
So? JensOhle (talk) 12:35, 21 March 2022 (UTC)Reply
"Need better sources." ... you think if Mötley Crüe management sends out a press release "Reunion of band" and some music magazine prints it word by word is a better source than a band publishing on their official web site that their founding member is back? Do you think that it's untrue, even a lie or maybe fake-news? What's it? JensOhle (talk) 12:39, 21 March 2022 (UTC)Reply
"Not enough independent notability from bands." ... Well let's look who is out there that plays in three bands - Mick Mars? Well he is famous! And he has more records out - well actually not true (Tom matches Mick in recordings) ... but well there was a lot in "biography" but all not reliable ... well is the birthday of Steve Vai really his birthday, is that reliable? "Yeah, yeah - he told us"... well he is a reliable source, but not ... JensOhle (talk) 12:43, 21 March 2022 (UTC)Reply

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