Jigchen L. Norbu

Coagulation (water treatment)

Hi Jigchen L. Norbu! Thank you so much for your wonderful contribution to the article.

1. Please consult WP:MOS to polish the article further. For example, you may not need very long "see also" list. Some of them may be removed. You may also want to change capitalization of section/subsection headings.
2. Please improve WP:WIKILINKS to and from the article.
3. You may want to upload more photos/VDOs to the article. What photo should be a good representation for the article? Jar test may be relocated to the subsection below.

--Taweetham (talk) 10:10, 18 February 2017 (UTC)

Hi Ajarn, thank you for the feedback.

1. I will edit my article to follow the format required by wikipedia.
2. I will improve the links and remove the unecessary ones.
3. I will try to add a video that I have of the jar test and will move my image to the bottom part where the jar test is mentioned.

Jigchen L. Norbu (talk) 08:09, 25 February 2017 (UTC) Jigchen L.Norbu

Hi Jigchen! Thanks for acknowledging my comments. Please edit the article as soon as possible. It has been a week since I gave the comments. --Taweetham (talk) 04:21, 26 February 2017 (UTC)

Hi Jigchen! Thank you for your contribution. It seems like you are on the right track, though more contributions are welcome. Adding a video to the article will be cool too. Please leave me a message if you need any help. -Athikhun.suw (talk) 02:53, 4 March 2017 (UTC)

Hi Jigchen! Please improve internal links to/from your article. For example, the words, titanium, zirconim and "Natural Organic Matter" in the article does not have an internal link to an appropriate article yet. --Taweetham (talk) 02:14, 5 March 2017 (UTC)

Thank you for the feedback. I have added internal links for the words mentioned. I will try to upload a video I have on my phone after editing it. Jigchen L. Norbu (talk) 09:14, 10 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay! I look forward to seeing the video. --Athikhun.suw (talk) 01:30, 12 March 2017 (UTC)

Hi Jigchen I've switched the headers of you article around on the mechanisms and factors part. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tsaenmai (talk • contribs) 16:35, 17 March 2017 (UTC)

Hi Tsaenmai thank you for the edit Jigchen L. Norbu (talk) 03:24, 18 March 2017 (UTC) Jigchen L.Norbu

I have added the video. It's very short but I hope it can help the readers get a better understanding of the process. Jigchen L. Norbu (talk) 04:14, 18 March 2017 (UTC) Jigchen L. Norbu