Jill Haigh

Your submission at Articles for creation: User:Jill Haigh/sandbox (February 5)

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The Ukulele Dude - Aggie80 (talk) 22:27, 5 February 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: User:Jill Haigh/sandbox (February 6)

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The Ukulele Dude - Aggie80 (talk) 01:27, 6 February 2014 (UTC)

Jill Haigh, you are invited to the Teahouse

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Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/John Ferry

I have copyedited the draft. A couple of comments, though:

• First of all, you need better sources: Reliable sources that are independent of the subject and discuss him in some detail. Newspaper articles about him or reviews in art magazines would make good sources.
• Secondly, you should move the <ref>...</ref> tags into the article content itself, right after the statement you're citing that particular source for. See WP:Referencing for beginners for an explanation of how to easily create nicely-formatted footnotes. The "References" section should contain only the {{reflist}} template that will display the footnotes.
• Thirdly, prose is by far preferable to the draft's current bullet point style. While I fixed the layout so that the points now each have a line of their own, that's not meant as an endorsement of the style. In particular, I'd suggest to remove the vast majority of the exhibitions and to instead focus on one or two high-profile ones, with a summary of comments by art critics discussing the works he exhibited.
• Fourthly, you may want to add more links to relevant Wikipedia articles as a convenience for our readers. I've added a few to the lead.

The most important of these issues, though, is the lack of independent sources; without better sources that support the draft's content we cannot have an article about Ferry. Huon (talk) 22:02, 10 February 2014 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/John Ferry concern

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Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/John Ferry

Hello Jill Haigh. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "John Ferry".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. HasteurBot (talk) 22:03, 3 October 2014 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/John Ferry concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/John Ferry, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:30, 12 April 2015 (UTC)

Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/John Ferry

Hello, Jill Haigh. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "John Ferry".

The page will shortly be deleted. If you plan on editing the page to address the issues raised when it was declined and resubmit it, simply and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code. Please note that Articles for Creation is not for indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. HasteurBot (talk) 02:00, 12 May 2015 (UTC)