Jivan39
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- Hello. My name is Ivan Macadangdang. I like to go to the gym, eat, rave, and then go to sleep. yay.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:21, 16 January 2018 (UTC)
Peer Review
editHi Ivan,
Peter Hujar was a very talented photographer especially because the majority of his photographs are depicted in black and white. I like how the article has a lot of information on his early childhood and his Ukrainian heritage. The article is set up to show the most important information is given and the article is set up so that every reader is able to understand the topic. I like your feedback of Hujar's style, it added some positive insight because he doesn't have a lot of information and most of the information is on his childhood and how difficult it was, as well as, his dying experience. It seems that because a lot of his photographs were focused on the Aids epidemic, he showed how people were dying without their dignity. They were suffering and he gave them a voice with his photographs. The citations are all reliable. My artist is Slava Mogutin and he is also a talented photographer. I think because he is from Russia and did not live in the U.S. during the Aids epidemic his photos depict rebellion and pride in being gay, he is very proud and fights for his right to be who he wants to be. I believe Peter Hujar and Slava Mogutin have some things in common due to the fact that they were both showing pride in what they do, but also they use photographs to inform the world on the important issues that are happening in their lives.
Article issues
editYour additions to the George Pardee article include passages copied verbatim or nearly verbatim from a non-free source. This was detected by automatic plagiarism detection software. For copyright reasons, your entire contribution has to be deleted. Please review the Plagiarism and Copyright training module before proceeding further. Thanks. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:54, 13 March 2018 (UTC)