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Waqar💬 16:33, 20 May 2024 (UTC)

So, my question is, how are the following not reliable sources:

The Architectural Forum, Volume 87, Number 6, December 1947.

Bacon, Edmund N. Design of Cities (Viking Press, January 1, 1967) ASIN: B001NBO6YG (Revised Edition: New York, NY: Penguin Publishing Group 1976. ISBN-10:  0140042369, ISBN-13: ‎ 978-0140042368)

Bacon, Edmund N. Form, Design, and the City (1962) A film presented by the Reynolds Metals Company in cooperation with the American Institute of Architects. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1GGqSkDXOSg

Burnham, Daniel and Bennett, Edward H., Plan of Chicago (New York, NY: Princeton Architectural Press, 1993, reprint of the 1909 original). ISBN-10 ‏ : ‎ 1878271415, ISBN-13 ‏ : ‎ 978-1878271419

"G. Holmes Perkins, Dean & Architect," obituary in the University of Pennsylvania Almanac, September 7, 2004, Volume 51 Number 2. https://almanac.upenn.edu/archive/volumes/v51/n02/death_ghp.html

Geddes, Robert L. and Spring, Bernard P., “A Study of Education for Environmental Design” (Sponsored by the American Institute of Architects, 1967).

Geddes, Robert L., “The Philadelphia School,” talk given at the University of

Pennsylvania, 2017. Transcript Lobell, John, The Philadelphia School and the Future of Architecture

Heller, Gregory L., Ed Bacon: Planning, Politics, and the Building of Modern Philadelphia, (Philadelphia, PA: University of Pennsylvania Press, 2013). ISBN-10 ‏ : ‎ 0812223594, ISBN-13 ‏ : ‎ 978-0812223590

Lobell, John and Kahn, Louis, Between Silence and Light: Spirit in the Architecture of Louis I. Kahn  (Boston, MA. Shambhala, September 9, 2008; 2nd edition (September 9, 2008) ISBN-10 ‏ : ‎ 9781590306048, ISBN-13 ‏ : ‎ 978-1590306048

Lobell, John, Louis Kahn: Architecture as Philosophy (New York, NY: 2020), ISBN-10 ‏ : ‎ 1580935281, ISBN-13 ‏ : ‎ 978-1580935289

Lobell, John, The Philadelphia School and the Future of Architecture (Routledge Research in Architecture, August 5, 2022) ISBN-10 ‏ : ‎ 1032015233, ISBN-13 ‏ : ‎ 978-1032015231

McHarg, Ian L., Design with Nature (Garden City, NY: Natural History Press, 1969.) ISBN-10 ‏ : ‎ 047111460X, ISBN-13 ‏ : ‎ 978-0471114604

Pearlman, Jill, Inventing American Modernism: Joseph Hudnut, Walter Gropius, and the Bauhaus Legacy at Harvard (Charlottesville, VA: University of Virginia Press, 2007). ISBN-10 ‏ : ‎ 0813926025, ISBN-13 ‏ : ‎ 978-0813926025

Rowan, Jan, “Wanting to Be the Philadelphia School,” in Progressive Architecture (April 1961).

“Runner-Up in the Boston City Hall Competition: Romaldo Giurgola, Elirinan B.

Mitchell, and Thomas R. Vreeland, Jr.,” in Progressive Architecture (April 1963).

Scully, Vincent, The Shingle Style Today: Or The Historian's Revenge (New York, NY: George Braziller Inc., 1974) ISBN-10 ‏ : ‎ 0807607606, ISBN-13 ‏ : ‎ 978-0807607602

Strong, Ann L. and Thomas, George E., eds., The Book of the School: 100 Years, The Graduate School of Fine Arts the University of Pennsylvania (Philadelphia, PA: University of Pennsylvania, 1990) ISBN-10 ‏ : ‎ 9991482474, ISBN-13 ‏ : ‎ 978-9991482477

Venturi, Robert, Complexity and Contradiction in Architecture (New York, NY:

Museum of Modern Art, 1966, 1977). ISBN-10 ‏ : ‎ 0870702823, ISBN-13 ‏ : ‎ 978-0870702822

Venturi, Robert, Scott Brown, Denise, and Izenour, Steven, Learning from Las Vegas (Cambridge, MA: MIT Press, 1977). ISBN 10: 0262036967, ISBN 13: 9780262036962

Williamson, James F., Kahn at Penn: Transformative Teacher of Architecture (London and New York, NY: Routledge, 2015). ISBN-10 ‏ : ‎ 113822927X, ISBN-13 ‏ : ‎ 978-1138229273 JohnLobell (talk) 20:26, 21 May 2024 (UTC)

Hello, JohnLobell! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Waqar💬 16:33, 20 May 2024 (UTC)

The Philadelphia School

So, I repeat my question: Given that the Philadelphia School comprises some of the most important architects and planners of the second half of the 20th century, what needs to be done for it to appear on Wikipedia? JohnLobell (talk) 16:08, 27 May 2024 (UTC)