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16:03, 4 July 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Napoleon Wal Mahrousa (July 4)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Timtrent was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

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Fiddle Faddle 17:10, 4 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Napoleon Wal Mahrousa (July 6)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by GeneralPoxter was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of films). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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GeneralPoxter (talk) 19:37, 6 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sherif Salama (August 6)

Latest comment: 4 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Otr500 were:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

*Unsourced peacock terms ("His performances were outstanding"),

very likely original research ("Sherif also enjoys a temperament which appeals to acting and this has made critics hopeful about his future"). The sources don't collaborate the content.
Apparent and substantial copy pasting from one of the references.
The draft, a (BLP, is actually a only a mini-biography or under sourced pseudo biography, and notability would immediately be challenged.
Everything in the embedded lists, that follows the combined lead/body, has only three references so is obviously primarily sourced by IMDb that is in the "External links" section. The source is not a reliable source.

Suggestions: If this is going to be a stub article then provide three references that show notability and remove the IMDb sourced embedded links (which makes it unsourced) so it won't deserving a ref-improve tag out the door. A notice at the top of the lists can indicate the list is not complete and not show to be an IMDb copy. This draft is not ready for publication. Implementing changes per the review would give a better chance for publication. Resubmitting without changes may result in a rejection. -- Otr500 (talk) 12:31, 6 August 2020 (UTC)Reply

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Otr500 (talk) 12:31, 6 August 2020 (UTC)Reply

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