Johnielle927

American Dream

What you need to do is merge and incorporate your work into the article rather than replacing it. CambridgeBayWeather (Talk) 19:57, 9 December 2007 (UTC)

Yes, and if you could spend some time on the talk page for the American Dream, you would find that people will appreciate your contributions and will be willing to help you, rather than you and your classmates fighting against the rest of the Wikipedia community. Also, I only started contributing to Wikipedia about two months ago, and I have found that probably the most important first step is reading up as much as you can on how Wikipedia operates: formatting, procedure, style, etc. Good luck, and ask for help if you need it. -Nik-renshaw (talk) 22:33, 9 December 2007 (UTC)

OK. I incorporated your material into the article. At the same time I added "Wikilinks" that is the [[ ]] around words to link to other articles. The biggest problem right now is the references. I was able to fix some of the Hochschild references, see references 8-10. I can fix the rest in a similar manner but you will need to tell me which match where. Cheers. CambridgeBayWeather (Talk) 22:55, 9 December 2007 (UTC)