Josue Hernanadez
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editHello, Josue Hernanadez, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:35, 18 October 2021 (UTC)
Concussions in sport
editHi. I noticed that your additions to the Concussions in sport article were reverted, and I wanted to give you some feedback on the issues there.
- You didn't include inline sources with your additions to the article. Everything you add to Wikipedia needs to be tied directly to a reliable source. After the statement, there should be a source. You can use a single source to support several sentences in a row, if it supports everything you say in those sentences, but you need to have at least one source per paragraph, and you shouldn't have any text after the final reference in a paragraph. You should follow the instructions on this training slide to add inline citations.
- When you're editing medical content, you need to rely on a higher standard of sourcing than the normal standard for reliable sources. You need to take the Editing health and psychology topics training module, and I recommend that you also have a look at the reliable sourcing guidelines for medical articles to help understand this issue. If you have questions about it, please get in touch with me.
- You included information about return-to-play protocols and information about how to treat a concussion. As a general rule, Wikipedia does not include "how-to" information of any kind. More importantly, it is critically important that you never give medical advice in articles - if you do, and someone takes your advice, you're liable for anything that might go wrong. (That's why doctors carry malpractice insurance.)
- Finally, you included annotations about your sources and their quality. This sort of information is useful in your drafts, but shouldn't go in live Wikipedia articles. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:12, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
December 2021
editPlease do not add or change content without citing a reliable source. Please review the guidelines at Wikipedia:Citing sources and take this opportunity to add references to the article. Thank you. MrOllie (talk) 21:01, 1 December 2021 (UTC)